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Blinder

Blinder

Photography Photography \ Architecture | 06/11/09 @951 | ahmetnuman | Comments critiques (7) | Views views (279)


Blinder
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Hi !

Make : Canon IXUS 990IS
DateTime : 29/5/2009 19:39
Software : Adobe Photoshop CS3 ( crop and darken )
ExposureTime : 1/200 Sec
FNumber : F4.5
MeteringMode : Pattern
CCD Sensitivity : ISO-80
 
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Avatar moserArtist

 06/12/09 @518

For those who vote but not comment.
Nobody learns anything by doing that! ;)

If you don't like an artwork and have nothing to say (constructive critique) don't bother casting a vote (imho).

This work...

Nice sunset with the almost orange colored sky.

Wish for more details in the foreground houses.

Now it is to dark to see details but you still see more than having the buildings shown as silhuettes.
 
Avatar ahmetnuman

 06/12/09 @781

@MoserArtist : Anytime, thank you for your constructive criticism in the good way. :)
I'm trying to find photos taken amateurish. I can not understand my poor english written criticism quickly.
 
Avatar lostinblack

 06/12/09 @793

Nice colour of the sky.
I agree with moser on details.
I wish those high buildings behind the three in front wasn't there. Would have been a better siluette without em.
Also they seem to be leaning just a bit to the right.
 
Avatar TheWickedPoet

 06/13/09 @348

A very good attempt to capture the details of this scene. Seeing this on a laptop screen that pushes darks towards brighter tones, the details in the foreground emerge perfectly, although that most probably means they are a bit too dark when on a less crappy screen heh ;)

One thing that has not been mentioned is that you have a (very) small horizon tilt in this image which can be a bit distracting? Could also be an effect of distortion I am seeing though, not so sure there.

You managed to get the exposure right, there are almost no lost highlights or shadows. The composition could be improved in my opinion: Aiming a bit lower so that the main attraction of the image (silhouettes + sky) move further up in the image. This gives it the chance to display good detail in the foreground while still having the skyscape in the picture. Quite good! But there are things to be improved :) A retake please! Cheers!
 
Avatar Mantis

 06/15/09 @495

For being the eye catchers, the buildings are too dark and lack of detail. With this in mind I cannot rest my eyes on anything. Try to brighten up the foreground, because the main subject in this picture is not visible.
 
Avatar Vasco

 06/15/09 @623

In these kind of works either you show the full details of the subjects (if thy are interesting enough) or you blacken them and make them appear only as silhouettes. You are a bit on the middle in this case...
 
Avatar Madanapale

 06/16/09 @083

Nice silhouette....maybe another day with some clouds and more colors on the sky.
Carlos
 
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